A Scary Bathroom.

Another piece from my creative writing class. We had to choose three pieces to revise and I thought that my original bathroom piece wasn’t scary enough.  Read it (and the original) here. Note I’ve used 2nd-person point of view.

 

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One Response to “A Scary Bathroom.”

  1. eleanorio Says:

    Yes, much better!


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